kemunto omare

Please review my poetry, normally I write fiction but before I post any of that on YWS I want to work on my poetry and your review will help. I ...

As the sun sets and night paints itself in, I see a little star in your eyes; A star so bright and its light undying Just like your love for ...

It was a humid day in early May. I was feeling down and I wanted to shout at anything around. See, I was at crossroads in my life and I ...

I think for me to comment more on this piece you have to continue it because though the introduction is good it isn't very powerful. The character of Maude does ...

Terrific. There is no other word for it. The narrator has a character that I can relate to. there is a sense of humour in the story whhich is simply ...

Hi, Kemunto here. I have a little problem and I need anyone to help me solve it. I' m having a litle problem creating my blog and I would really ...

This is a good piece of work and it is very touching. however there are some pats that need to be checked on. When you said I'd be all right, ...

This piece is quite inspirational. What struck me most about the story was the character of Melanija, especially at the end of the story where she is shown to be ...

very unique piece of work and the second stanza is very creative. I also like the the third stanza which ends the poem in a mysterious yet dark sided way/ ...

I must admit that this is a beautiful piece of work. Short but worth a read. the punctuation is quite good and they give your poem good flow. I love ...

I love the way you have described 'mommy' in this poem because her role comes out quite vividly in this poem. However, one possible error that i noticed was in ...

The more I come to this site, the more I feel like I belong. Thank you to everyone who has written giving me great advice and tips that I can ...

a friend to shop with in the summer to tell things that dont really matter and dance with if there is no other that's what she wants a boy to ...

this is a poem dedicated to a recent crush of mine, after i wrote it i was able to understand more of how i felt. I see your face now ...

hi, I'm new here and I want to introduce name is Kemunto and I live in Africa. I am aspiring o be an author and I write or want to ...